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Re: Christian Bale Character -- Constructive Criticism
It seems like a good start, but your overall bone structure and face musculature is looking really not defining mass. Sure, he's a skinny guy, but there are still consistencies when it comes to the head. For example, the forehead needs to be flatter, and find the plane change that's found on the top of the arch of the… -
Re: Christian Bale Character -- Constructive Criticism
Still has the same problems as the one above, 1) he has a very pronounced nasal bone 2) the nostrils should be pulled out slightly 3) the crease that is the temporalis is poorly defined 4) from the ide view i can see his zygomatic is melting down his face 5) from the neck the strenoclidemastoid muscle is missing or seems… -
Re: Christian Bale Character -- Constructive Criticism
I think you should define the planes of his a bit more...his face looks kind of 'muddy' right now. Try to lay in the planes first using this as an example http://www.polycount.com/forum/showthread.php?t=76733 try to find some more pics of him with heavy shadows then try to match your sculpt to the planes on his face. The… -
Re: Christian Bale Character -- Constructive Criticism
sup man! he's looking pretty great so far, but the two areas that stand out as needing the most attention are his arms and his nose. For the arms look at the size of his hands, the volumes at the wrist and elbow transitions, and try rotating the hands to a more natural angle. The nose feels really narrow and pointy. Some… -
Re: Christian Bale Character -- Constructive Criticism
Wow MM now that's what I call CONSTRUCTIVE Criticism. I wish I came to you before I even posted Christian Bale. I will try reading some books or something. Do you have a portfolio I could look at? I was going through your threads and none of your images load up for me even on different web browsers and the comments on your… -
Re: Christian Bale Character -- Constructive Criticism
i still feel as though there are a lot more folds on his pants than need to be, particularly around the knee area. maybe you are going for that look, but it feels unnatural right now... almost like hes wearing tinfoil pants. as far as the face goes, its getting closer to looking normal, but i feel like maybe you missed… -
Re: Christian Bale Character -- Constructive Criticism
Its definitely making progress! And I really appreciate how you are taking the crits as well :) The upper cheeks feel lumpy and his feet are rather large, its coming along. The wrinkles are a tad over the top as well. Try to first create the wrinkles where the clothing bunches up at the seems and stretches and pinches…
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