Hey guys so I can use some feedback on this girl that I'm working on. some tips on how to make her more like the concept will help greatly, what can I I do to make it feel right, how show a approach her armor and plates plus some stuff to look out for! WIPs and Concept:
Hey :) Overall its an excellent model. Great crits by steady and torontoanimator.Transparency and nicer boobage would definitely add to the alreayd awesome model. The major concern i have with the model,apart from the breast issue,is the polygonal distribution. To be honest, it doesnt look like a 5k model MAINLY becuase of…
Hey, I don't think that is the most appealing cut out shape for her stomach. I would either cover her stomach (would look nicer) or go for a shape that works with the stomach muscles, maybe a more angular one. Thanks my two cents! Good luck with everything! :)
Hey everyone! Thanks again for the support, its awesome :) Fnitrox: Thanks for your crits man, Im aware of the color differences in the hair - I changed it up, because I wanted to head toward a more complimentary harmony with pinkish for my final image :) Its subtle but its there :) Also her panties are staying white…
Hey Guys! Updating my concept, my bf started to work on her already, so im hoping for some fast result, and me painting textures ^^ If someone is interested in making her too, it would be awesome! :D im posting updated version and also front and side view
Hey there Decoy, Awesome work. I love teh colors. 8-) Try giving her some kind of face abnormality. A cataracted eye, maybe a scar, or a slice through her eyebrow where hair doesn't grow. She seems a bit "soft" at the moment. Toughen that chick up.
I thought it'd be awesome if you could somehow clump together her hair at the ends.. kinda like how they look like in the anime. not sure how it'd look though, heh. also the texture makes her cheeks look flat (very bright).. intended for anime looks?
hey guys, thanks for all the feedback. Some of you are right about the ear now that you mention it.. it does look kinda big. perhaps adding a few more things to her like stuff she would carry might identify her a little better?? btw, great link Erich!
Hey all! Finally got around to creating an account/post for this contest! I decided I'd use the Blip rig from Animation Mentor as well as the Kayla rig. What's her deal: she's a little robotics genius that uses her flying robot pal to move around and attacks others by firing lasers out of it's eye. *wink*
Hey! Nice job here. I think you tottally capture her spirit. The only thing I could critic is that her eyes looks a bit weird ... maybe wider than it seems ons the concept... But it's just my opinion. Great job so far ! keep going =D