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Re: [Portfolio] Stefan Groenewoud
Ditch the pillar and cargo container as they are so generic, the props in the 1st environment are more interesting than them. Also ditch the textures section as I don't think they add anything. If you want to showcase your tiling textures you should do that in the break down of your finished environments, which leads me… -
Re: I need portfolio help for college admission.
Alot of great stuff in this thread for you Jordan. I just wanted to pop in real quick and say one thing about your models - While you are still a beginner, one thing you could do to really help your presentation 10 fold is by taking renders of the objects. If you press f9 while in the perspective viewport, you can get a… -
Re: Portfolio critique
- First thing that stands out to me is the About me page. the moment I saw that block of text I left, I wanna see pretty pictures :P. Most employers don't have enough time to read through that much so I think you should keep it short and sweet with a bit about you, your skills and experience (previous work, education) -… -
Re: engine room
Cool environment ... looks like an engine room to me, so you've achieved that goal Seeing the render, I had assumed this was an environment for a game, but then looking at the wireframe, it seems you have a lot of wasted polys for something of in-game resolution. Something that mainly seems odd to me is that the big… -
Re: Tyler Walters - 3d artist
I don't think anyone doubts you can do 3D. You posted a link to your website and we are really just critiquing the site layout and content. Usually when people here post threads with their website and name they are looking for portfolio critiques, including website layout. It's all about presentation as well as the art. If… -
Re: Props
Joe, you got some great props started just need some fixes, mostly minor. You could get a ton out of these if you go back and make the fixes these guys have been talking about. It wouldnt be to hard to do and it may seem a little painstaking. I would suggest some Ambient Occlusion maps for them since you have the high poly… -
Re: [Portfolio] - rollin .. and .. well.. samurai cowboy pictures too
the idea is nice and all, but form my point of view, it's a real mess you have multiple thumbs/pages per model. there's the 1st one with the darfly and the varlach, then somewhere later you ahve he varlach again on it's own, there are two thumbs/pages for the Cowboy samurai, there's a page for 3 characters, then later on… -
Re: Take action
I have no problem with criticisms. It's not my design, I'm not a graphic designer, so I really can't take it personally. I just implement what I'm told to. However, as Noel and I were discussing in IRC, saying something is "shit" isn't really a well-reasoned design critique. Because I am explicitly not a graphic or visual… -
Re: Delete this topic.
man I don't know where you're putting the polys, might be on the back since you're not showing screenshots of that. but yeah you have as much detail in that 1700 poly model as there is in quake 3s 800 and less poly models, you have to get better with your modeling first if you want people to be excited about texturing it,… -
Re: Maybe give up and jump from fifth floor
Hey Akavov I don't have a lot of advice for you in terms of becoming established as a 3D artist---I'm 28 and I've been at it since I was your age, and the stuff on your ArtStation is already better than mine IMO. Maybe someone else can chime in on that front. For what it's worth, I think you're doing great. If I were to…
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