you need to get rid of all those layer styled fonts. The effects look bad to say the least, and the chosen fonts are not selected well either. That also applies for non text things using layer styles. Those things all gotta go. Less is more. 2 different fonts, 3 maximum, and they have to fit together. Use a nice sans…
PryZern Thanks for the kind words! I think my presentation skills arent the best they could be. But Ill try to address this in future projects. Larkbeef Hey pal, first off congrats. How are you finding it? Cheers for taking the time to give some feedback. Yeah as I said to PryZern the presentation work isnt that…
Woah! Boost of answers all of a suddent! AbKI Thanks!! Inhert Thanks! about the pigtails I did realized they might be too thick. It's a very easy fix so I will do it for sure :) They are not set in stone at all haha! Two Listen Hahaha I will fix that boob line (no clue what a flapjack is tho) And yah here nose is very(too)…
don't bother for a second on the LoTR tours. none of the sets are left, and a lot of the big panoramas were digitally pieced together from various places. besides, you won't even be thinking of it; it's a stunningly beautiful and varied country all on its own. though the north island has its charms, spend your time on the…
first off imo. you need way more content: 4 pieces all 3d/normal mapped is a little bit few. The portfolio as website: I suggested this already a few other portfolio guys but have a look here: http://www.dafont.com/ the fonts you picked are in my oppinion not unique enough, - it resembles copperplate a little bit. Also the…
Don't worry Vig, there are in fact some christians on this board, even if they don't say so very often Pretty good stuff, especially given the nature of the project and the time commitment. I think your color choices in particular serve the religious themes--very rarely is any art posted on this board needing 'safe' and…
Heh, so the opinion so far seems to be on the DS...but not for using Colors on the train since I'd essentially be drawing on glass during a bumpy ride... :D !! The only problem with the moleskine (as I have a few already, and have done it in the past) is that if I want to work in color I have to then lug around a bag full…
I agree with everything Firebert said. The biggest issues right now is the strange shoulder separation in the front and back, and how you have it mesh in the torso. The anatomy of the back looks like you got the center areas about right but made up the rest. The clavicle is too defined at the bottom side (there is usually…
I don't feel equipped to comment as a 3D artist since I only got studio experience as a 2D one, but I hope that approaching it from a design and usage angle is still helpful. Ensure the text is selectable. You want to make the life of the people looking at your CV easier and this includes letting them copy and paste stuff…
@Benc: Thank you very much for taking the time to do that paintover. I agree with the cylinder issue, they are taking quite a lot of polys in there. I also just realised that whats taking most of my polycount at the moment are the AMMO boxes, so Ill deffinately be simplyfing a lot those (at the moment overall they are…