this looks like an awesome start. everything is looking pretty good. i feel it is lacking a feeling of weight. i can't really get a feeling for what is happening, is she balancing? is she springing up? falling? that sort of thing. from here i would look towards adding more compression in areas as well as relaxed/strained…
whoa mindblowing work I just learned about your thread yesterday and damn you have progressed fast as hell keep that drive and you will be unstoppable. I think you should keep practicing even more extreme poses using valid reference of course. I am no anatomy expert still I feel like you have some poses but not enough. I…
Sorry about the attachments, Imgur being a pain. Kept working on, with all the great crits. MM I took the images into photoshop and liquified them. I got rid of the red line proportions finally! As a side-note MM, and aside from the joke, I know you have a point. You're an amazing artist, and I've learned a lot from your…
Although I certainly don't qualify as an "amazing polycount anatomy artist", I think I can share some useful input, so here it goes. For starters, are you using any specific reference for your poses? I think this is pretty critical for figurative work. You've definitely got your anatomy and proportions under control. But,…
Hi Polycount. So this isn't actually anatomy, but I figured I'd post it here instead of making a new thread. I'll present this update as kind of a challenge. If people want to do it, someone can make a new thread for it. __________________________ I experimented with this this morning and had a good time. I figured I would…
@ dirigible - i understand your point about those lines being somewhat consistent give that you ignore the the actual size of head or the scale of the human. so here is the problem with what you are doing. you are completely ignoring real height of the people. all humans are not same height. some individual organs in…
I know she's still a WIP, But i feel like she's falling into the uncanny valley a bit. I wouldn't even mention this if the hole model felt that way, But its only portions. Isolating from the thumbs to the collar bones, it feels realistically rendered, Good form, Believable anatomy (for whatever that's worth coming from a…
I agree that the problem is structural, I just don't really agree with the lines over images to diagnose it. I did that while running out of the house (Sunday football at my father in laws house -- someone kill me please) but I guarantee that if I took the time that all well proportioned people would line up like that. To…
@ Yuri - you are going in a good direction generally with most of your anatomy work, so i am just trying to nudge you out of a zone that you seem to be stuck in. i had the same observation problem once and i actually think i still have a lot of observation learning to do. so take my critique with a pinch of salt. i see…
I realized I didn't answer your question very well. When you ask 'where to start', I would say technically, proportions and mass. But honestly I'm not the best person to ask, there's a ton of other people here who could give much better and in-depth answers than that, and seeking those people out would probably do you…