Haiasi - nice layout. i liked the troll on the right. i feel like your eye has no reason to go to the right side of the painting now - nothing leads you there. before you started on the left and followed the arc of the bridge over to the payoff of the troll.
Been working on this fantasy porn chick my roommate had in his drawings the past couple days. Face is awful right now but I like where everything else is going right now. Tell me what you guys think looks bad.