First thing coming to my mind is: perspective seems odd. You wanted it to look huge and chose a low perspective, but it is not really low. Camera should really be on the ground for such a three point perspective and horizon way lower. Horizon seems to be somewhere in the door, but you look on top of the person. The fore,…
Hey Jessica, how long (average) do you spend on your gesture studies from the life drawing classes? I noticed some you get the shadows in and some extra details. I am used to 30-60 second poses and I only get the basic form in. Also these look quite big yeah? A2 newsprint? I find it hard to fit many poses in A3/4. Anyway,…