FunkyBunnies: Fantastic work! If I had to give you any crits, I would say that the face bugs me just a little bit. Compared to the rest of the body it seems a bit too seductive for my taste. I feel that a more petite looking face with less exaggerated features would be more appealing here. But it all comes down to a…
this might be too late, as you're already well into the texturing phase, but i feel like you're missing a lot of the major forms that make up this guy. the concept shows very distinct shapes in the torso and arms - this guy is made up of a series of fatty sections. you did a good job matching these in the face, but there…
To be honest, I've never seen Lovejoy... So I'll stick with Al. :p Your Clement Sauve looks gorgeous though, keep it going! But judging by the concept, I'd make him ever so slightly taller. Duncan: Dude, that little guy is awesome! Is it based on a concept or just your own thang? JFletcher: Looking good, but like MM said;…
@future-fiction- nice stuff but there are a couple of things that I noticed though. One is that the strap sticks out on the left shoulder area on the back view and also the hair.should be an easy fix..And also it might be the lighting setup but I can't figure out where the violet/purple light from her hair is coming…
Question: Do the images need to be so wide when the character is only taking up 1/4 of it? Maybe go for three portrait style images instead of landscape? Just feels like a lot of dead space... Character looks pretty cool, would like to see a close up of the face since it looks like he's got crazy eyes (in a good way). Any…
@Neox: Good work man! Generally, I like the face and the character as a whole. Anatomy is good, period. Although I find the slant on her eyes maybe a bit too much; and the hair's gonna need some more work to really sell it imho. I do like e-freak's suggestion on the shoulders. But I would use the feather cape to your…
double post, but I got crits :D Top panel: Word ballon looks squashed up because of its long flat shape and the massive white space to the right. I would move the foot down a tad and give the balloon a more uniform shape. You can still anchor it to the border. I will assume the white space is for a establishing shot…
BoneBrew22: Well in the words of Da Vinci "Art is never finished only abandoned" It's an evolutionary process and maturing process that artists go through in there lifetime to arrive at different states of "finish". It really depends on the work and intention. So for studies, know what you what to learn when you go into it…
GoSsS - That is a sweet design, its a great balance between a cartoon/comic book style and a plausible design. I'd be intrigued to see a whole character. Xoliul - That car reminds me of hours spent playing GTA 3. Tea Monster - I'd say your on the right track. Do you have perspective turned on in zbrush? ('P' was the…
*^* I really appreciate the effort in feedback you guys are giving me! I've tried to put in all the crits to the best of my ability, give or take some design choices. I've ditched the pink, gawd knows what I was thinking... >_< Almighty_gir, If that's queried at me lol...? Not that I pretend to be awsum enough to go making…