I would say the first thing that you should improve is the lighting. http://www.scribd.com/doc/4063526/Pages-From-TheHowsAndWhysOfLevelDesignSE-Lighting pull down the ambient color to a more darker one.Its night there so at the dark areas you need almost black color.Add more attenuation/intensity/color to your light…
DWalker - Good point. I'll try sliding it down the arm a bit and adding something like a strap to attach it. Think that would be best so that the strap wouldnt go right in his armpit and probably look weird. looprix - Thanks! Ya, I agree been a bit light handed with that stuff. I'll throw some on to see how it looks. Don't…
Well. Various things. The first thing are the normals: That leather wrap looks like painted on the wood surface (you would need to increase the height map of that layer). The other thing is AO: There should be some kind of occlusion on the limits between materials. Other thing are wood details: For me the general colours…
Yea, everything looks pretty same-y. I'd try to use some different materials to break up the monotony, have writing on the floor or walls that shows where the different doors lead to, and the shapes in the hallway could be more interesting. The hall could use more clutter, wires or crates or something? I like this image…
Peta wouldn't give a damn unless you dug up a forrest to build the thing, plus peta isn't like that anyway and they'd realize that murder, no matter how virtual would be murder nevermind counter productive(this would applies to any movement). Actually I'd think peta would dig my solar powered rig. Science fiction and ants…
if you look at this metal; http://www.caponeart.com/SLS_Gow_Trunk_01.jpg You can clearly see the damaged metal near the big edges that draw our attention. The green metal rust is brown colored, and there are several tones of grey and green in the texture. The grey and green color of that texture is still in 'range' of…
wait wait y'know, being 'evil' doesnt restrict u in anyway. u can be making ur environment for some1 with pollen and butterfly allergies. so you'll have flowers and flowers and butterflies and all kinds of life but if that allergic guy was to enter... he'd DIE. so it's evil. see? honestly though, i wanted to take part in…
His 200 wins as an amature wrestler make him a good wrestler not his victories in the UFC. Ending up in halfguard is not a good takedown? Most people land in full guard when they manage to take someone down :| Besides in this case i really think the fact that he was in halfguard worked in his favor. He was doing tons of…
thanks for the crits so far everyone! Cholden: Yea I realize now that the shape itself of the building is boring. I need to rework that and think of a more life like building with better damage. As for the additions and pipes and stuff, I have a list (silly) of things I'm going to be adding as I go, accessories and what…
Hello all! I'm trying to fix up projects that need it in my portfolio before I do perhaps one more project and then look for work. I am looking for critiques on the cockpit for my podracer (it was one of my very first projects). It's not quite finished (it needs some materials added to a number of parts as well as more…