This is quite nice version of her. I'm also having a project of creating Max as well, but it's temporarily stalled because of another big project. My goal will be realistic.
Love that horn design! really nice. The stylised zygomatic is cool, maybe more of that style somewhere else? Its at odds with the very realistic rendering of the rest of the body
I'm still kinda bummed that you are mixing the proportions of the original FFVII concept with the outfit of the FFVII AC/CC that both changed his proportions to be more realistic ._.
The wear on the caps just doesn't look realistic; remember that it's a thin coat of paint over aluminum. Also, the ridges really should be a bit deformed by opening the bottle.
I really like it! Automatic fur tech seems awesome! It's a bit cartooney looking. It's well suited for the examples, but maybe too limited for more realistic characters?