This is looking awesome so far! Based on this picture ... ... I think her eyes need to be way darker, and her skin tone is also a bit too light. I also think that her lips look a little too small, especially her upper lip.
Man, you got a ton of edge loops you don't need. Especially going right down her middle. Also she has this weird... Duckness to her body. Like her torso is super long and her butt sticks out like a rocket.
I like her proportions, nice work Duncan. Only crit is I think her shoulders need widening, and also the top of her chest/clavicle. Shoulder/armpit area looks squashed in right now, and makes her arms look shorter than they are.
This is pretty solid. Her face could have been more feminine and her body looks rather masculine but I suppose it matches the concept rather well. I think you could have mirrored her whole body and her face from the looks of it.
i added a cuple of tattoos. one on her stomach and one on each arm. her arms are mirrored so it is the same tattoo. here is the tattoo i drew up for her and here is a picture of her with the tattoos. C&C welcome *click thumbnail for bigger picture
aesir >> Hmm, I think you just went from freakish looking torso to freakish looking limbs on that paintover. Not crazy about either one. Rota626 >> Her actual body proportions may be fine she just needs her pants pulled up and a shorter shirt. Actually her pants look pretty dumb all around. You mention Mirror's Edge and…
how about sharing character setups? everyone has light armor Vaan: dagger & shield, primary thief also uses disable to draw aggro if monsters start attacking Penelo or Fran. Balthier: Gun when long range or Spear when using as a thief. Basch: Hammer and Shield, secondary fighter. I kind of messed up his license grid early…
It looks pretty cool ! I think that what makes here look "not so much like Lux" is the hair more than the face. Appart from her eyebrows that might need a bit of highlighting. I think the previous versions you did of lux's hair looked more like her because the hair band and the kind of fringe are two characteristics of…
Okay, im not dead, lmao I'm currently still in school and haven't been able to find time to work on this but here is everything that I've done so far since my last post. I have a rough idea of what i would like to do with her, but its all not 100% solid, for the outfit ideas i was thinking of doing a mash up between the…
I was planning on doing some animations for Leona, but instead I decided it might be more interesting to come up with my own character. I didn't stray too far from my original idea and went with my vision of what Leona's younger sister, "Ariel", might be like. Background: Ariel is similar to her older sister, Leona, in…