i'm not going to repeat anything that has been said. but i noticed on, for example, the girl w/the pink hoodie you broke the UVs right on the back of the legs. i would put the seam on the inside of the legs. not only would nobody see them, but you have a texture for the seam of the jeans right there anyways...perfect place…
Just 2 things stood out to me. Her lower leg seems a bit too long. Maybe lower her knees by a smidge might improve the leg anatomy. Her arms might be a little short. Other than those two I think you're doing a pretty good job with the rest.
Hey man! You probably don't remember me, but I met you briefly at the meetup. I saw your stuff in the recap and I was like, "Oh $&#@, I met that guy at GDC!" So, yeah! Awesome to see your progress! Still love the style. Keep up the good work!
Do you have back story for this character ? Why is she having donkey ears and is bandage like a mummy ? Also her arm look to short and her lower hip to wide from anatomical stand point , maybe just maybe she is bow legged or her legs are too straight
Why did you have to build him asymmetrically? I'm unfamiliar with the mount from WoW, but right now your proportions are very cartoony. His legs are too close together (front legs are too far back), his nose is huge, etc. Are you planning a high poly version of this?
Good start! It feels like he's missing his lankiness, and hunch. I think his legs are too short in your iteration. His legs are spread out pretty wide in the concept, and is still boasting a long tibia/fibia + femur. That may help get that hunched effect going too :)
Thanks everyone. I have made her legs a bit shorter as a test and I am a bit un-decided. I like them longer but I also like the shorter legs. Makes her look cuter. I think I will go for shorter. Thanks for the suggestion ahhh everyone :)
If you do decide to put it in zB put some more loops in the front and back lower legs, and take some out from the ears to make it more uniform. If you change the pose I would only bring the Bunny's hind legs up, that would seem a more neutral pose.
Captain morning wood! I´m not sure about the proportions, maybe the torso/arms could be shorter so the legs won´t look so little, but maybe this ends up looking like he´s a dwarf... in the concept the legs/boots are more thick so this might compensate their shortness.
Remove the header. Just a simple name/position (text even better) Merge Home, Edu and Personal Work into a single portfolio page of only the best, final pieces. No WIPs, doodles, etc. Merge Bio and Contact page into a single Resume. Then forget about this page, get busy with new content.