Looks more like a slightly cartoonish Crysis than Mass Effect. His proportions are slightly odd, a bit too top heavy rather than the sleek, kind of Apple look ME had going for it. The helmet looks too tall as well. That being said, for a tiny bit cartoonish Crysis it looks awesome, spectacularly detailed!
OK, the body and armour are quite good. Not the best I've ever seen, but still damned good and would look great in Mass Effect 3/4, possibly win your challenge too... but that face tops it all! DAYUM, that face is positively awesome for an ingame character! One of the best I've ever seen and straight to the inspiration…