Here's the full draft. 100 words over, so editing will be rough. I'm also still very concerned with stilted pacing. I plan to refer to Diana as Diana earlier on in the text, since the use of "her" becomes confusing with the introduction of Leona. Still deciding where to make that change, however. Do you know how to kill a…
Looks like it's coming along! Currently I see a bit of a undecidedness when it comes to whose room I'm exactly looking at here. Currently the ikea-like furniture designs that you chose, the big peace sign on the chair, colorful posted notes, messy yet organized looking clutter, Mac and Macbook-type computers leads me to…
Yea I know this aint a 2d or 3d stuff, but it could help for your 2d-3d concept. I found this today cleaning up my old HD, this is 4-5 years old for me and I find it kinda funny. My teacher gave this to us to help us improve character traits. Might be usefull or not but I tought I could share it with ya guys. Feel free to…