Really nice job on the displays and screens. They are so vital to any sort of modern/sci fi type environment, but getting them right is an art in its self.
I'd recommend watching the 1970's sci-fi movie "The Andromeda Strain". It features an extraterrestial bacteria that behaves rather similar to what you are attempting to do.
A Sci-Fi environment would be cool, you should take some inspiration from companies you want to work for, and direct that piece towards that particular style