Hey this is my kind of model Seriously, I like the start, particularly the idea of having some clear parts on it like that. Hard to tell without wireframes, but it looks like there could be some messyness in the shoulder area.
about the roundness - that could be a super easy quick fix. Judging by your wireframe you could just spread out those edges a bit more and it'll make the corner more gradual like the reference.
#33.333 If thou locketh thine computer with Max open, ye verilly thou shalt return to discover either vertices of enormous size, or random bits of geometry hath become visible only in wireframe mode.
Wow, that's really cool! I was really hoping they'd show what the layered sphere-glob resulting mesh/wireframe looks. But they went straight to some shots of working up a little fine detail instead.
yeah, it will also help if you state what exactly would you like advice on. the piece as a whole? the modeling? the texturing? etc. as adam said, wireframe shots are a great place to start. from the viewport is fine.
I found if the computer goes into sleep mode or screen saver while the max window is open verts can disappear, and end up showing only wireframes even though you have smooth/highlights on.
Are the texturing in the shadows on the pants right along the lines for the wireframe? You should either add in another edge straight down the front of the leg and/or round out those shadows in the texture, cuz it is looking overly boxy there.
Post your work in the Pimping section, you might get some tips in there. It also helps to examine the wireframes of models that look good, see how they laid out their "flow." Everyone has to start somewhere.
I forgot to post my completed Warframe scene here. I finished stage 2 & 3 for my Warframe Corpus project about a week ago. Larger images and the other stages can be found here Stage 1: Warframe Corpus Project Stage 1 Stage 2: Warframe Corpus Project Sage 2 & 3
Thanks :D I decided on getting rid of the church to bring more attention to the foreground and away from the background. Id like to include some wireframe shots and texture flats on my AS post, just trying to come up with a cool format for it.