Looks great so far. Only thing I would say is don't be too afraid to give some of the areas a little more damage. Maybe some smaller cracks or give a few the trim dynamic style detail here. Otherwise, great work!
Looks like you did a good job following the concept. I think the coolest thing about this piece that will really help it stand out is the trim lighting effects and the shock type things. Gona follow this one as I am interested to see it textured :)
Thanks for the comments and suggestions :) There is paper scattered about the environment but maybe there should be a bit more :) I'll have a play with the lighting see what I can come up with, and thanks pointing that out magmabolt, will give the video a trim on YouTube :) thanks again for the comments!
Looks nice. Only thing that's standing out to me right now is the trim between the floor and the wall; it looks very black and keeps drawing my eyes to it, maybe lighten it a bit? Also, can we see a close up of the pastries in the display fridge? :)
Looking pretty good, I really like the gas meters, nice attention to detail. Hopefully those maps aren't too big =/ The AC unit could use some more lovin, a nice piece of trim around the bottom, maybe a name plate?
Those are good ideas, thanks! Didn't think of that for some reason! I find that being self-taught I have these weird pockets of missing information when it comes to process, even though I've used trims, scale-aware, and triplanar materials many times before.
Yes I think you are close to what it should look like , some of the volume above the brow have to be trim [havent indicate that clearly on my paint over ] Yes more or less accurate some are exaggerated , for planes I like image below and Faraut books
Check the sunset overdrive trims or the star citizen thread. The tech is very close. The core element spawning this thread was the very reason it had to be taken down. The info will most likely be visible at one point, for now it is up to the people who made it up when to post it. Sorry.
Loving this but it looks a lil bit to crowded on the floor and to many wires hanging down a bit to low..The scene looks a bit to overdone to me, isn't your focas point the theme ? well anyway its a bit to over done so trim it down a bit and it should be fine.
The tire looks too smudgy. Even very old tires keep their track straight. The trims...well I'm not a tire expert but that seems off to me and too repetitive. You could also put some dirt patches here and there but then again do not make it too repetitive.