Your character is solid! when you say it isn't working, It might be helpful for you to put it into words what isn't feeling right. I would honestly say though, try and wrap up this character and do another. This sort of thing you just need to do a lot of, and you will naturally improve. Like if you were to say aim to do…
Hey guys ! Here is an ork sword from Warhammer univers I am working on. I think I am done with the highpoly and I'll start the lowpoly and texture. but comments and feedbacks are always more than welcome to help me to improve ! :smile:
Updated to final here: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/nYrQ6O and a SHQ img if you want to see it super up close. Marketplace item, https://www.artstation.com/marketplace/p/NNknX/crystal-sword-nebularis
Decent start. Given that he's naked, the edgeloop flows on the deltoids could be better. Reference the examples in t he Polycount Wiki. Sword tri count could be reduced. Is there subsurface scattering happening with the skin?
You and me both, Pogo. Love DS2, and i really like where they're going with bloodborne, no sword and board anymore, just fast action. Will it get ported to PC eventually or is this a PS4 exclusive?
Any help ? ALso how woudl be a proper way to stamp those carvings I added with alpha better on the surface of the sword hil so that it doesnt loook good at center and smoothed t the borders?
This is awesome! Nice work. I think the sword feels a little bit light/swimmy at the moment - especially moving into that hold at around 6s - it needs to get there much faster - otherwise this is looking really cool!
small progress, getting the overall shapes of the sword done. now that i look at the image, I'm probably gonna remove that little thingie in the back of the handle, kind of stands out a bit too much.
I went back to the modeling stage and added more armor and changed the shirt design. Im currently working on the sword, but im liking it a lot more now. Any feedback and critiques would be appreciated.
Looks great! When I animate a character with a swords/club/stick I usually have them hold it off to the side and I don't swing the arm very much. Only a few degrees.