Great job on the update, particularly the second version. The extended trims on the sides fill some of the empty space and balance it nicely. Will vote Yes!
thanks for the critiques Pyr: Altho; It was WIP and still is so alot has to be changed / trimmed / scrapped / etc. Here is the last update for the day:
Made a simple plaster texture, and mapped the planks texture to the beams and wooden trim for blockout purposes. Off to sculpt beams and the floor now.