Another very nice drawing. The rider's upper body is far too large and i think his leg would turn out more. The clouds, while great, do not transition into the grass well or around the horse. The composition is also much better. Have you considered illustrating in ink? a painted wash would really compliment your style.
I think the pose is awkward and the sword doesn't continue correctly. That said your style is fantastic, what resonates with me is that it really looks like a medieval woodcut. The high level of detail in the background flattens the image, but this also evokes a comparison to wood cuts. What I might try is to experiment…
I didnt see the tablet part; the transfer from paper to digital is a hard and frustrating one. like anything else it takes time. spend several days drawing on the tablet. it took me days in hours to get used to it but now I freaking love digital, so much more flexable, faster, cleaner the onely downside is you have no…