In that case I'll just keep commenting =) In this older version you had a great idea for the grey areas, which you used on his skirt. I think this fits Razor much better than the cracks you just added. I like it how you added round elements to your design!
Agreeing with belkun - make the lantern a ward! Lanterns are supposed to light your way, and let you see things in the dark. I think it thematically fits the best. The concept with the lantern on the wooden beams is my favorite. The other designs (like the courier one) seem to rely on the idea of the lantern floating, but…
The valve headpiece is an homage to her alpha design and is not a reflection of her current silhouette or aesthetic. Her current items are very light and almost vertical in their shape, as if the hair is being raised off her scalp. Now let's address your concepts. The reason why the hairdo seem unfitting is because the…