Like C86G said your basic shapes, proportions and your muscles are off, its much easier to fix these things at lower divisions. And always keep looking at your reference, I would suggest getting a second monitor to use for ref.
Did a little proportion tweaking, trying not to alter his build too much: I think you should also study some more knees and feet. The lower half of the knees are too large/wide; the feet are too small and flat.
Slipsius: actually went out of my way to get that white in there, thought it added some depth, but obviously a bit too artificially. Thanks for the feedback. Someone suggested a water tower on the left side, so i threw that in there too. New revision:
The high-poly looks great. It seems like you're going way lower resolution on your low-poly then you need to--or, if you're targeting mobile games or RTS with hundreds of units on screen, your texture maps are too high-resolution.
This is a bit of an older one, but I just want to make sure I understand the topology correctly- are the extra loops at the elbows and knees (that terminate in triangles) used for deformation? So it can bend its knees and raise/lower its arms at the elbow?
Love it! Only crit would be Warhammer Orcs tend to be more hunched over with their heads literally sat between their shoulders, if you drew a line from one to the other. The position of the bicep gives the impression of the shoulders sitting rather lower. Red
Video games are not sports. They will never be an Olympic sport. Monopoly isn't an Olympic sport. Pool, bowling, and poker also aren't, and should never be Olympic sports. Paint ball, and Poontang hunting now I can see those as Olympic sports.
http://www.geniuseshop.com/index.asp?PageAction=VIEWPROD&ProdID=54 vs http://www.wacom.com.au/price/intuos3/intuos3_A4.html The Pensketch is much, much lower resolution and has batteries in the pen. Unless its really cheap, I wouldn't bother, personally.
Hey, thanks for the feedback! Also, sorry for the slow progress. I've fixed the nostrils a bit: I've UV'd all her hair and baked the eyelashes. The shells in the lower left are for her ponytail. Might straighten them out as well (old nostrils):
Stock feels flat and is draging it as a whole a bit down, but overall its super sick, the front grip is immensly good. You might want to lower some of the phong boost, so the dark-deep areas do not flatten under lighting.