Final version - I'm submitting it as a PDF in just a moment, but here it is to read if you don't want to download a PDF Silver streamed out of his body like a current and wrapped itself in Lamb’s hand, her arrow disappearing into the light above his heart. He had embraced his life with fullness, and accepted his death with…
Hey! Took a look at the file and the first thing I would note, is that the UVs are not good enough. This loop for example occupies only a few pixels - a bad bake is inevitable: Second note would be that the model is currently not very optimized. Lots of geometry that doesn't contribute to shape and shading. Some general…
Hey! You were asking for some crits and you said something was off, I see you've moved onto clothing now. Good start so far! I noticed some small issues with the anatomy construction nothing too serious,I checked your profile and it says you work as a character artist so you probably know best but just in case you missed…
Hey Ed, thanks for sharing. First thing- I like that it's under a minute, keep it short and sweet. Personal call, but the title card at the front can be shorter. You want to jump into the action right away. First shot- The first jump cut is jarring. When you switch camera angles you don't want to switch the characters…