It's looking a lot more moody now, though not nearly as dingy as the concept. (I'm aware you're only using it for composition) I feel torn between two different focal points however, the bright yellow lamp and the muted desk lamp. In the concept the focal point is the bright blue light from the window which fades until it…
Hey thanks Eric! Means a lot coming from you! I appreciate it. Yeah that was an effort to help focus more of the central focal point towards what is going on in the foreground, but I see what you mean! I just made some more adjustments that were nagging me and ended up with this so far. Upon some recommendations, scale…