Calling this done right now. I'll go back later and make a body for myself. For comparison: http://www.polycount.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1540592&postcount=74
Hey chiniara try adding some mortar in there, having black lines between each brick just doesn't look right, get a reference and try to reproduce that.
I would ditch the custom text altogether, make the character the focus either center top or smaller on the right of the text, use a font for extreme ease of readability.
Thanks Ferg! You could be right, small chance its the perspective in marm but going to remeasure and play with it a bit :) edit* head was def too big :p
Good catch, I forgot I was thinking of mirroring the uv's but went back on it and never deleted the line. Thanks for the heads up, Ill delete that right away!