https://youtu.be/lKN8eDHy2wM?si=9pLhmixaQKGETohQ&t=79 @ this point, the flame shadows, idk if that is how it works irl, i haven't studied that, but the one on the right of the screen doesn't bug me but the one on the left does as i can see the "flex" and it doesn't feel "natural" whatever the right is doing from what i can…
had looks like a side profile of a "small house" was that the intention. I feel the final bottom part could be used for some sort of info, seems like wasted space to make, yes i am very late but better that never receiving a comment. Perhaps a lot more color playing, pink nearing towards a redish might be best to stand…