Looks awesome! You need to show some comp/fx breakdowns though. Also you have some continuity issues with the lighting between the coming out of the water (0:34) and the following shot (0:36). Should be an easy fix of just matching the colours of the key light. Might want to go with something more electronic for the music…
I'm glad you guys liked it :) The video wasn't really structured at all, live performances are always a bit scary because so much could go wrong, and i can make many mistakes which make me look dumb... but oh well, i'm glad you learned something :) I've been regularly getting around 15-20 people per cast, so I'm planning…
This suffers from many of the same things that were brought up in your art test thread. Mainly, the design doesn't tell us anything about what this crate is used for, how it functions, etc. I also have no real idea what materials it's supposed to be made from. I would suggest working off existing high quality concepts to…
@SeveredScion Hey thnks for that! appreciate it. Yes complete agree with you, having the chance of recieve valuable feedback from this amazing community is unique. Im excited to continue posting here and help other artist as well. @Durkel Hey thnks for you comment, appreciate it. Yes actually I made a realtime version of…
Thanks for the Crit man! I'm really slow in illustration, so here are some of the updates. I did the shield in 3D and use bodymech rig to pose for composition. Here are some of poses. It feels not right for braum as heartseeker glory. So I did another and this better comp The round props are poros, his guard and…
Personally I think you should work form a realistic character. I know stylized characters are fun, but you really need a solid background in anatomy to make it work. Also you need to be able to reference real people when learning anatomy. From where you are at now if you wish to continue I would drop you subdivisions and…
Yes totally agree, but was going for one piece at a time, might as well progress and take it further though, I'll go for a apoco look i guess, sitting on a swamp with a swamp boat.. some guy uses it as a hub/hideaway from the world, so I'll fill it with bare living essentials and try make it look a bit more "used" as you…
(Update)! Firstly, thank you again Mark for your critique, it really helped drive a lot of discussion at my university whilst I was working on getting feedback on improvements. I took in to account what you were saying, analyzed the paint over and along with various other critiques, this is the current result! I've got 3…
So I am working on this piece and I decided I would go ahead and share it; I wanna see what kind of feedback I get before I continue painting. I really appreciate any constructive critiques you might have. So far this is just the initial sketch with some flat values. I plan to do an overpainting, eliminating the line art…
Made a few variations on the tower after the professor overseeing my independent study mentioned how unstable the current one looks. I'm leaning towards 3 or 4 at the moment. Now I'll actually get jamming on the textures for the tower. I also made some adjustments to the lighting and height fog, but it's really flattened…