Some thoughts on this: There's something off about his eyes. I think they're simply too big. You might also want to add a grey line of hair and I'd really recommend drawing his other fingers on the cup. If you want to let him hold a cup with just two fingers, why not go for an espresso ? You could also try letting him show…
Wow, thanks you guys :) ! Well, i just tried Iray in Substance painter 2 to see what it could do ... and i'm quite impressed by the quality of the lighting for a really fast render time. Here is two new screenshots : Nothing really new for the eyes, but i tried to tone down the colors a bit and did a lot of tweaking on the…
I would suggest cutting out alot of the 'fluff' in the article too, I loved the example you gave of "Tag" criticism which looks like something that belongs on the back of a box, vs. one which is more engaging and describes the specific issue, the two paragraph's in between could have very easily be compressed to "Here's…
Trust me, no one has the time to look thru your blog. They just don't. Are any of the respondents here actually hiring people? Day to day? I don't think so, but please prove me wrong. Seriously these replies paint the wrong picture. Make a blog if you must. It's a nice way to connect with other entry-level artists. But…
The damage is very well sculpted, you'll get some lovely normals from it for sure. The only problem I see is the base/top of the pillar. It has too many segments to it, and some of them are rather rounded and sloped whereas the rest of the sculpt is right-angled and has sharp edges. Try to have maybe 2 - 4 layers to the…
I'm disagreeing with the two posters above me. I'm wondering if this is the real issue, or that the real issue that you've gracefully glossed over is that you have been living with your girlfriend for 7-8 months and have been perennially unemployed for the duration. It's not her responsibility to support you whilst you…
Thanks SINtuition Maybe I will intensivy the already existing AO. Yeah the metal should pop a bit more once I get it into UDK and build its material. As far as the screws, I intentionally made them large like that but I do see how it looks really awkward. I will reduce the size and maybe put four on each panel instead of…
Terrific work on texturing this, the decals give it a very industrial look. It reminds me a bit of some of the Elysium sets (didn't like the film but it had some nice visuals). The only thing that bothers me is it looks a bit cluttery. Perhaps this is what you're going for as you mentioned you thought it looked too…
I think you should step back and re-evaluate the scale you have. Maybe create a ref sheet from the LOTR films and really look at that. You may want to deviate even further from the concept. In the entrace to the workshop, my eye wants to look at that mining cart, but it's too damn small!! It looks comically small compared…
Like MattyWS said it is just a school library lol but I get your point thanks I did have the lower shelves like that but the perspective.made it seem a bit off and with the reference I was using it was too maybe ill go back and move stuff about and see, it's all modular so shouldn't take to long from the blueprints it…