Hey Thatscrawykid I know this is cutting it by the wire as far as the deadline but I would look at your contrast and significantly scale it back. Your highlights are overblown and pure white. In pictures that doesnt sit well on the eyes. As humans we tend to overshoot what's actually more realistic and go overkill on…
Completed this for the artstation comp. Was a struggle but got there in the end Heres the link to the artstation page for anyone interested. [1.33 MB image removed by moderator]