Made some alterations, especially around the ribcage/latissimus dorsi (hopefully pushed out enough), with quick color thrown on: Also the start to the clothing:
Looking pretty awesome, agree with others on the loss of silhouette, but that happens with tight deadlines. I understand this is for school, but come back to it and push it some more!
Polys are way cheaper than they used to be and depending on the complexity of the scene and amount of assets you can push a lot more geo into your project.