Great work on production and stylization. I really appreciate the craftmanship. My biggest issue with the render is the lighting. Specifically the value focal points is falling off the page. It's ok to have the breasts be the focal point but then you need to frame to that focal point. And it's impossible to give the image…
Welcome everyone to the 103rd Bi-Monthly Environment Art Challenge for the months of July and August! This challenge is a way for real-time 3D artists to test their skills and create a piece of work based on concepts provided. It's open to those of all skill levels and we do our best to provide meaningful feedback along…
I installed this junk last week and it was actually kind of cool, the whole security center thing, but service pack2 f*cks up my mose sensitivity making it impossible to use Maya. I thought my mouse had just worn out but it turns out it is service pack2, I have uninstalled the service pack and now my mouse works fine…
Moon Rotation: Low framerate. Solar System: Very choopy, the compression is really hurting the astroid belt. Maybe you should add Saturnus whoosing part the camera with its own rings moving around it. Glow Balls: Choppy. Lacks punch, if you can, try to add some sort of acceleration and a warp bang (just check some space…
Look on your timeline at frame 456 for both the Clouds and Snow layers. Both of them have a keyframe at that point which stops all motion, but the layers continue on until frame 500, where the movie loops back to frame 1. The end result is that from frames 457-500, it's just sitting there not doing anything. IF you slide…
Welcome! Overall it’s a really nice looking scene. :) One thing that stood out to me is the focal point. Right now, the bridge and the stone lantern both draw a similar amount of attention, so it’s a bit unclear where the viewer’s eye should settle first. You could maybe push one of them more as the primary focus, either…
@Tom_Axler The time frame is there to provide that structure that can be useful when simply trying to overcome the choice paralysis of where to start that's so easy to get into. In the end though, reaching the finish line is the most important part and I'm grateful that both you and @LeonDreiling kept at it. Just finishing…
I believe Jonny is referring to the seam between columns - it's apparent between each horizontal pair, but most obvious in the columns between the two torches. It looks like the normals aren't quite lining up on the adjacent faces along the seam. The two most likely culprits are vertices which haven't been welded after the…