The eyes are too slanted and they are too close to each other. The waist and thighs are too thick, if you want to have same proportions as the concept. Also I would reccomend modeling in more relaxed pose, 100% T-Pose is not exactly the best pose to start with.
The quick way to smooth your hard edges, just select all polygond and add a small amount of relax. This method is badly controllable, but i fix most of problem areas. (I use 3ds Max, but i think the similar feature available in Maya).
@Aimbiz thanks for feedback! You're right about the hovercraft, it was mostly a relaxment drawing so i expected some major functionality and perspective errors! :D For today i felt like trying out some other artstyle: as allways is feedback highly appriciated! :)
Good work Cooke, You're close to where I am at the moment, you just need to relax your model a bit. She looks too tensed, unless thats what you intended to do. Keep up the good work bro! Gagan
Man- In all my final crunch week stress I nearly forgot about this! Just thinking about having this to look forward to after it's all done is relaxing! Ahhhh :) Edit: oh damn, yeah, we still need to settle on a venue! :I
Your composition and color choices are fairly strong, but if I were you I would focus on relaxing your characters more. They all feel a little posed right now. maybe a little more foreshortening on the arms and things. Keep up the good work.
I love how you got the story wrong aesir, I hope you're not as relaxed when it comes to attention to detail in your own work. best thing would be to lock this shit up, the majority of us read news websites I'm guessing.
Happy to see this tool released! Just tried it out on a fairly simple mesh from MD and it worked flawlessly. One thing I would love is the relaxation aspect of the script to be a standalone for use with other manual retopo meshes, if that makes sense. Great job!
I would suggest deleting the thread $!nz, and just cooling off for a little bit. This kind of response isn't the least bit professional...so, yeah. Relax, play a few games, make some art, and don't let someone on the internet get to you.
I say about 4 - 6 on my own, and then I enjoy relaxing with the roommates and watching them play as well... I defiantly don't want to fall in the trap of not playing any games at all, need to see all the sexy artz n stuff :)