Ok. Id say your biggest Issue is your portfolio design. First of I would merge the two sections you have right now, your "2D art/UI" section isnt really UI at all, its just more concept art, by keeping them separate you only show inexperience. secondly, at first glance I didn't even understand the images on your front page…
So I'm going to critique your site first. First off, remove the "University Projects" and replace it with personal work. This will only hurt you in the long run as people could consider less of your art if done in a college. Remove the Sketchbook tab all together, having any WIP models on your website could only have…
It's a nice start mate but i'd change a few things about it especially if you are trying to get authenticity. Try to make the pauldron bulkier and and maybe change the angle a bit to fit the pose (see the clipping on img. 3). Also maybe make the icon on it an object. Might make it come out more and create more dept and…
Honestly, at the moment it looks pretty good. It's got an interesting design and from the side view has some interesting lines. I think the other views could use some work as it is very square - maybe it bends inwards in the front or something like that to add some interest there. I'd also, as mentioned above, definitely…
While I found the concept on Feng's site, I'd like to go ahead and give this piece some character: "ROBERTA" Comparably, this character would be as interacted with as Big Daddy was in Bioshock. I wouldn't say she is a boss type character, but a main element to the games story. Roberta weighs in @ around 7,000 triangles and…
i think I might bring in chronicles of riddick escape from butcher bay as an example... that game was awesome, but mainly because as an interractive experience it was exceptional. I think it sold well too, I hope people learn from that. Movie tie ins are not necessarilly bad, in some cases they are cool because like with…
still working on it, but i think this is getting closer to what i'm going for in the beauty shot. let me know if it's way out of control, etc. etc. whats_true... thanks man... i hear ya now... i did think about making his boots covered in snow, but since it is only a pedestal, i didn't think it would be too sound to build…
Wow close call man glad all is well though that is terrifying when you have a near death experiance. I got a couple of those myself. Hope it's alright that I mention my little tale: I got hit by a car myself though it could have been my fault I had a bike with no back brakes when I was around 18 riding in the street no…
Nice! You should embed your images, instead of attaching. You can use the editing button that looks like a framed landscape and sun. Also, if you embed an image in the first post, then people can use the Preview button (magnifying lens icon) in the main Digital Sketchbooks list, to see a thumbnail of your artwork before…
Good 3d models tell a story. To tell a story well, the model needs to be designed. To design well requires researching similar types of objects. I hope this helps you.