Looking good I agree, you need better jaw line unless you were going for a more snakelike mouth in which case you would need to shorten the snout. Just a quick sketch of a skull in paintshop to give you an idea.
Looking good, keep pushing it. Try to really nail down the material definition, I understand how you want to use white for the skull, but is it really a Bone object? if not try something new, im also not reading the white on the chest well. Keep at it!
The back of her head looks a little small. If you look at a skull you'll see that the face is about 1/3 of the head. Also her tummy button is too high. Other than that, fab job. I'm especially loving your textures!
Putzing around in Mudbox. I think I may take this a bit further and turn it into a witch with a big black hat and stuff. Still not sure yet. It's exceedingly hard to find photo references without running into scary porn. The length of the skull is intentional.
The only issue is from the side, the head is really too flat. The front of the face works well enough for an Asian character, but the back of the head is missing some volume. The hair should be bulkier in the back to allow some visual space for the skull. Beyond that it's cool.
I love how It seems comic that the creature still cares to cover its privates. I also like the transition of the mouth from the skull to the chest. On the other hand, the monster doesn't seem to be realistically able maintain a balanced stance with the current proportions.
Looks cool, be careful with skull and bone designs though. I dont think its forbidden to use or anything, but since LoL is a big thing In china that stuff usually gets censored there, so they try to stay away from those type of designs.
"You're as violent as they come. I know this, because I'm as violent as they come. If the constraints of society were lifted, and I was all that stood between you and a meal, you would crack my skull with a rock and eat my meaty parts. Wouldn't you?"
i think at this stage u need to go back and study anatomy more befor eyou put more details on your sculpts. the details are very sketchy and not organic at all. it would help you more if u study skull anatomy too.
I'm far from an expert in charachters or anatomy, but the back of his neck (where it meets the skull) looks wrong. Also his waist is way to thin and from the side it looks like he has breasts. The folds in the clothes are looking god tho.