Thanks, man. I can see where your coming from with the hatching. Also, that looks quite lovely; thanks for the link! Just about finished with this logo:
Thank you very much for taking the effort giving me a valuable feedback BioLumi. I will work on those points and remove the logos illustrations and 3d models.
I would boil it down and squeeze the text in next to the logo and not let it extend past the guard. It will serve the same purpose while making it look MUCH sleeker.
Same animation converted in H264 with background and logos https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zWkMlLmwr3c&feature=youtu.be [ame] https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zWkMlLmwr3c[/ame]