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Re: Portfolio Feed Back
The layout is fine (maybe a png for the logo), work is decent but I would advise to sit down for 2 weeks and push out some new things, your latest stuff is always your best stuff. Then do a hard selection, only show the best work. Also do you want to do characters or environment ? For the characters, definitely cut the… -
Re: fantasy character
Hey, I decided I am going to push myself to do a sketch/painting/doodle every week in an effort to learn, by reflecting on each piece and deciding to approach things differently on the next one. These are the first 3. I hope the rest will vary and I will learn in the process. I am going to attempt to push myself out of my… -
Re: League Fan art - Katarina
Looks like a good start, I'd push the waist in a bit and make the breasts bigger if you want to stick to the artwork from the game. The arms look really muscular, and the shoulders look bulky too. I think it would look great if you pushed the female qualities, as that's what the character is based around. gogo man! -
Re: Hard surface sculpting using as much zbrush as possible
you should push the depth and partition of the muscle fiber groups of the suit. everything is feeling too flat, more like lines cut into a wetsuit than a series of articulating muscle groups like the concept shows. try dividing them into their own sub tools, should help make pushing the volumes way easier too -
Re: Sci Fi Interior
Looking much better Mark! I still think you could push the Specular differences in the materials further still however, also id try and push the floor Normals even deeper. Glad to hear your doing some foreground stuff, that will help with the framing and the lighting looks alot better as well. Cheers man! -
Re: Blood Elf Spell Breaker Final
thanks you guys :) @ Moose-- great crit man-- yeah, one thing I'm really needing to push is painting other colors into the separate materials, while keeping the painted surfaces (i.e. metals, cloths, skin), color families, and values consistent. definitely going to push all that you mentioned in my next piece -
Re: Lily & Snout Animation WIP
It's looking great! I think you could push her splits in the air pose some more. Let her feet hang out for an extra beat. In fact I think a lot of the most extreme poses could be pushed further, just for that extreme keyframe, and then back to something more relaxed to give it some pop. -
Re: Shafted
I would push the pose a little more. her upper body is twisting a bit back to the left, but i would push that even further and make her lean back even more. And id move the arrow a little more over to her left, closer to her heart. right in the center is kinda boring and weird looking. -
Re: Have a look at my vehicles and weapons
Thats a good point, I definitely could push stuff a little more but the art direction for most of this stuff was more along the lines of realism with a slightly pushed grime and grunge feel, its meant to be realistic and not overly gamey.. Thats really an aesthetic choice I guess, depends on the project, etc. Thanks for… -
Re: Store Front Environment
your producing alot of work at the moment at a good level and you are showing improvement... but you do seam to work within your comfort zone. it would be nice to see you really push either technically or conceptually. besides that the peice looks nice, id push the destruction and wear and tear though make it look more…
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