Jedi
After a badass trailer form Blur i got really inspired, and decided tos tart a new character:
My main concern at the moment are proportions, i want to block them before i get to the real sculpting, so every advice would be helpful.
My main concern at the moment are proportions, i want to block them before i get to the real sculpting, so every advice would be helpful.
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Either way I like the head and the hands. Good start.
can't wait for the next update.
t4paN- Thank you, gald you like it! well you certainly got the point, i would like him to be build rather like some average guy rather than some superman proportions.
Renaud Galand- thank you!
hobodactyl-glad to hear that, thanks!
adamlewis- big thans for this liquify image! On that one he seems a bit to tall for me, but it really helped me see some mistakes i did.
So here is a new one, i am quite happy with this, i will shortenb his feet a bit, but besides that, i think it is ok. what do you think?
i ask because i can see a lot of similarity and some of teh common proportions mistakes that occurs from using that base mesh.
the whole posture of the body looks awkward and the boots look a little too big. the leges look a little short too. i kind of agree with the paint over from adam since it gives teh character more powerful proportions.
i would make the head and hands a bit smaller too.
MM- nope, to be honest i don't really know who arshlevon is. Everything here is done by me. Thank you for your feedback!
update:- new proportions fixes and i've started sculpting the boots.
Regards!
The the jaw/throat area is looking a little saggy, so I'd suggest pulling it in a tad and suggesting more Adam's Apple. Not too much, just enough to make it a little more slim.
His shoulders seem a little narrow, at least in my opinion. You might do well to experiment with different shoulder widths.
I'd also make his thighs just a smidge bulkier towards the hip. Not enough to give him chicken legs, but they might look better if they aren't so straight up and down.
Lastly, it may just be me, but his feet look slightly long for his height. It might just be the way they're shaped that's throwing me off, however.
new image, i didnt work on this much since last update:/ Do you guys know some good tutorials for cloth or folds?
here's something you will find usefull for sure :
http://www.selwy.com/2009/zbrush-clothes-tutorial/
Big thanks for the link Renauld!
A bit thinkgs to do, but now i feel the high poly part is slowly ending.
You have some great fabric folds sculpted there. I loovveee sculpting fabric. Its fun. Its zen-like.
The jedi face is looking swell too, I wish though that I had some bigger shots to look closer at though. From this distance it looks like the hair and beard could use some work. Its not bad, but its not great.
Another thing is the deco design on the belt. You could do a lot better. Right now it looks like you masked that area off then extruded it and left it at that.
Aside from the obvious I assume you just haven't gotten to the hands yet. But i know you will! So kick ass! Looking good!