looks fantastic, agreed with the red being a tad much. the red being in such a green environment will already pop so it dosnt need to be super saturated.
maybe add some ropes to the houses on the right side to match all the ropes on the boat and houses in the middle
This is a really nice piece, the only thing that bothers me is the tongue. It was the first thing that my eyes were drawn too due to its intense redness. I would recommend maybe toning down the color to match the overall color scheme of your piece. The whole composition has a lot of green hues in it, so maybe play with that color scheme. Keep it up though really cool piece.:)
hah i didnt know that thread was still around, yes this has gone through like 1000 revisions i almost gave up, but figured i dust it off since im looking for work now ;P
For sure i'll desaturate the red on the tongue, whats the best way to do more of a growth? model vines? or do it through the texture? i was thinking of just adding green bits growing among the wood on the ship
agree with adam. needs more overgrowth. The trees could use some more love too. A few leaves or tiny branches to give it more shape would help. they're pretty simple atm.
Really nice! Remember seeing this ages ago too... The only things that pop out in a bad way to me are the rather generically textured tree to the left and the sharp contrast between the rock and the ground on the right. Other than that, great style and color!
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maybe add some ropes to the houses on the right side to match all the ropes on the boat and houses in the middle
...found it! A year and a half, can't believe I actually remembered that.
http://boards.polycount.net/showthread.php?t=50720
Anyways, great work! I really like the way it turned out. BTW, I agree with the Brome-anator^^
ya, I agree, get more swiss family robinson on that shit, and have some trees growing through/over/around the housing.
hah i didnt know that thread was still around, yes this has gone through like 1000 revisions i almost gave up, but figured i dust it off since im looking for work now ;P
For sure i'll desaturate the red on the tongue, whats the best way to do more of a growth? model vines? or do it through the texture? i was thinking of just adding green bits growing among the wood on the ship
And i also remember your old thread when u were starting the ship