Male Torso and Head

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  thnom polycounter lvl 20

  Jan 2008

  The pecs look odd - it looks like they've been modelled as a guy with his arms up above his head, not in the pose you have - so it looks fairly strage.

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  notman polycounter lvl 20

  Jan 2008

  I had thought the same. His nipples look like they are entering his armpits rather than relaxed in their normal position

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  Jaco polycounter lvl 19

  Jan 2008

  The v shaped muscle on his neck looks strange, it should go from the tip of the collar bones straight (or almost) to the ear.

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  Helixx polycounter lvl 17

  Jan 2008

  Thanks for the crits guys, gonna have a go at those suggestions and repost.

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  Helixx polycounter lvl 17

  Jan 2008

  Alright, fixed the position of the nipples to an approx. according to my reference model, I dunno how I missed it haha. Worked the pecs a bit more and fixed the sternocleidomastiod. It should start at the top of the sternum/end of the clavicle and stretch to the base of the skull right behind the ear.
  
  
  
  Thanks again for the help, anyone and everyone is free to critique to their heart's content.

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