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Lars Homestead WIP

Alrighty heres a scene for my portfolio. If you've seen Star Wars then you should recognize this. I'm a huge Star Wars fanboy and am proud of it. As it stands I have the models done with the exception of vegetation and a little bit more clutter. Textures on the way.

No sky box yet, I will add more polys to the terrain, I built everything in pieces and haven't combined everything so there are some 'seams' due to crazy normals action.

So polycount for everything is 22248, now actual main enviroment geometry is only 4382 tris. Thats because all the props amount to alot of polys. The reason for this is the moisture vaporators are 1600 tris each. I'm planning on making a smaller LOD for the vaporators since some will be see very far off. So hopefully I can get the polycount down. So should I be worried that these moisture vaporators amount to the majority of the polycount?

Crits and comments are definitely welcome.

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  • Ott
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    Ott polycounter lvl 13
    It depends on what your goal is for the scene. If it's for a more cinematic or next gen scene, then it's too low. If it's for low poly games, then it's too high.

    You need more chamfers on the edges of things - particularly the steps, edges of the buildings, and the cliffside where it drops into the hole.

    I would also look at your scale. If that archway is a door, then to the right of it you have 7 steps that equal about 8 feet at least.

    Overall I would suggest some small rocks and perhaps some sort of small dry flora throughout as well. Something to break up the giant expanse of flatness.

    Otherwise - it's coming along. Can't wait to see more of it.
  • CheeseOnToast
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    CheeseOnToast greentooth
    Your polycount looks ok to me for a current gen game, particularly if you're planning on making LODs. You could drastically reduce the polycount of some of your props but still keep the silhouette pretty much intact for being seen at a distance. Since you're using Maya, you could see what effect your LODs will have by using the built-in auto level of detail tools. The polycount should update in the head up display.
  • fritz
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    fritz polycounter lvl 18
    where are the power converters?!?!
  • boostermoose
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    where are the power converters?!?!

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    At Toche station.. mwahaha

    thanks for the feedback thusfar everyone
  • boostermoose
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    Ok I need help. I've made a high poly version of my vaporator and have been trying to use maya's transfer maps to bake the normals. Its almost worked but has screwed up while baking. All the new detail on the high poly version which is mostly straight edge loops is coming in wavy in the normals. I also made sure there is no overlapping uvs. Also one piece on the normals is orange, which prolly shouldn't be confused.gif.

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    Besides that will have mass updates soon, need to get this project wrapped up in the next week.
  • Steve Schulze
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    Steve Schulze polycounter lvl 18
    You'd save yourself vast numbers of polys by making the machinery out of seperate pieces rather than trying to weld everything together into one cohesive mesh.
  • CheeseOnToast
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    CheeseOnToast greentooth
    This is the usual result when you normal map cylinders. You can minimise the waviness by moving the envelope geometry about. If you move the cylinder caps of the envelope as close as possible to the high-poly version, it should tone down the waviness a fair bit. Failing that, you can always do a bit of touch up in Photoshop.
  • Cybroxide
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    Cybroxide polycounter lvl 17
    to give you a visual on what Cheese is saying Ben Mathis has illustrated exactly what you are refering to in his normal mapping work flow at the bottom of this page:
    http://www.poopinmymouth.com/tutorial/normal_workflow_2.htm
  • Mark Dygert
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    1) Everything does NOT need to be one continuous mesh. The wasted time and polys are not worth it. Let me guess some know it all teacher told you this is a hard and fast rule? Ask him/her why, and keep asking why until they can give you a solid answer, I haven't found one yet that can. Chances are its just some myth they are propagating because someones cousin who knows a guy that has a buddy that worked in the industry (cleaning toilets) in 1982 said so. You can actually see the joined cylinders impacting your normal map in a bad way. It also makes it hard to edit the main piece when it has a cling-on-zit stuck to it, you have to be very careful when you move the tiny piece around and it will screw up your UV's. If its just clipping in it won't effect anything if you move it around.

    2) Too many polys where it doesn't count and not enough where it does.
    - What engine is this for?
    - What angles are you going to be viewing this? First Person Shooter, Top Down RTS or Locked 3rd Person Camera? With this info you can pack the most detail into what will be seen the most on the screen.

    3) If you're doing it just to do it, then toss low poly to the wind and go nuts. Read: going nuts doesn't mean more edges on cylinders it means detailing out the rim of the hole, adding rocks and plants ect...

    4) Your "high poly" version is lacking in detail, the details you added really don't require a normal "bump" map. Normal maps are a way of capturing high poly detail like metal seams, vents, rivets, wires, dents, paint chips, beveled plating detail ect... Its not really good for baking a 32 sided cylinder into a 8 sided, the normal is pretty devoid of detail when you use it that simply.
  • conte
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    conte polycounter lvl 18
    i like! also fan of sw
  • boostermoose
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    I love Ben Mathis's site, every time I have a question I will check there first.

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    1) Everything does NOT need to be one continuous mesh.

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    I guess it has kinda stuck in my head to extrude everything rather than to combine. From now on that will probably change.


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    2) Too many polys where it doesn't count and not enough where it does.

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    This isn't for any game its just a portfolio piece so it won't be in any engine. However, I imagine it being in some kind of action game probably first person. This vaporator is one of the most important pieces in the scene. The cameras in my demo reel will get up close to it but there will also be duplicates of at varying distances from the camera. I will make a small LOD version of it for those situations.


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    4) Your "high poly" version is lacking in detail

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    Vaporator_negwt.jpg

    Here's a picture of what I'm trying to make. Being an actual prop on a movie set they made it out of wood but its supposed to be metal. I captured as much detail as i thought was necessary since I can't actually find much more from any ref pics. Its just my first model of it doesn't completely capture the silhouette of it with all of the rings it has. All of those tiny rings and square indents wouldn't be modeled for any game model I wouldn't think? But I do agree its not really a 'high' poly model.

    So where should my polys go in this object? Its stands around 1800 and will lower now that I will just combine the small tubes instead of extruding them.

    But thanx for all the c and c so far. This is exactly the kind of stuff I need to hear from all the vets around here.
  • boostermoose
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    So I fixed the mesh and combined everything and knocked the polycount down 400-500. But I followed Mathis's tutorial and fixed the envelope/cage of the the mesh. However still got the same wavy results.

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  • Cybroxide
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    Cybroxide polycounter lvl 17
    If all else fails, like cheese said you can use PS to correct it.
  • jRocket
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    jRocket polycounter lvl 18
    I don't know if Maya has such a feature or not, but I use an option in 3ds max called "UV Match" instead of the usual Raytracing method to do normal maps. Instead of casting rays from the low poly cage into the high res geometry, UV Match compares the difference bewteen the models based on their UV's. This will get rid of the wavyness you are seeing. The downside is that your high poly mesh will have to have the same UV's as the low poly mesh. I usually use a combination of the two methods, combining the good and bad parts in photoshop.
    I believe xNormal also has this feature.
  • Por@szek
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    Por@szek polycounter lvl 18
    Try to bake all the elements separately. Maya have problems with baking all elements in in shot. Should helps.
  • Mark Dygert
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    So where should my polys go in this object? Its stands around 1800 and will lower now that I will just combine the small tubes instead of extruding them.

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    After comparing your high poly version to the ref photo, I would suggest going crazy insane on the high poly detail. You'll more than likely only use the high poly version to make a normal map, its a working mesh that doesn't need to be optimized or pretty. It just needs to get the job done of translating a crazy amount of detail over to the normal map.

    If you're going to bake that detail down to a lower poly version then you don't have to worry about the high poly being too high, go nuts, model every last rivet, every last vent slat, every dent and plating seam, apply some procdural noise and dirt. I would even be tempted to cut into the model where the paint chips just so that translates to the normal easily. There is so much detail that is in the ref that is not on the model, either put it in the high poly version or be prepared to paint it. Right now your high poly version straddles the line between poorly optimized game asset and barely usable high poly object, not a good fence to be sitting on, push it one way or the other.

    Vents and vent slats, very easy to make, just make one and instance it 15-20 times. it will take less than .5 seconds and translate pretty easy to the normal.

    Little detail boxes and knobs are easy to do also but you left them out. I don't see that R2D2 style vent anywhere on your model, thats some cherry detail and should be in there. It screams I'm a piece of Star Wars recognize me!!

    There is a center ring that has some great Star Wars-esk pattern detail running around it, yet not on the model.

    Most of the inner ring pieces have some kind of exposed detail to them. The outer pieces are more like armor or plating. I get the impression that your model does not have this distinction and looses some of its resemblance.

    Here this is easier...
    SWDetail.jpg
    All details I don't see on the high poly version.

    It's starting to take shape and you're getting the bugs worked out. Keep plugging away and you'll have a great piece =)
  • boostermoose
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    Alrighty so I added more detail to the high res mesh and finally got the normal map sorted out. I came to the conclusion that 3D Max is better at this sort of thing than Maya. Because I still got the waviness even after breaking it into separate pieces. Started the texture but still want to work more on it, at 1554 polys. Tried out a render..

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  • boostermoose
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    Here's on an update, texturing is around 80 percent done. Not all the objects have textures on them yet and hoping to add more detail to everything else. These are just screengrabs so no lighting yet, high quality rendering was on causing some lighting seams in the pix.



    You should be able to spot a seam in the skybox, fixing that at the moment. Speaking of which I am trying to investigate further into image based lighting in maya. Currently I have just a mesh for the skybox, so if anyone knows anything about that or any great tutorials that would be great.

    So any crits or suggestions on what they can see so far would help out alot.
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  • boostermoose
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    Here's some renders.

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