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http://www.3dandmore.com/
Wanted to post my site and get some feedback on what I can do to improve it. For the past 2 years I have been doing Computer based training so there is a lot of industrial stuff. Before that I was doing digital FX and Charter Animation so there is some of that as well.
Wanted to post my site and get some feedback on what I can do to improve it. For the past 2 years I have been doing Computer based training so there is a lot of industrial stuff. Before that I was doing digital FX and Charter Animation so there is some of that as well.
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BIGGER!
If your page doesn't catch someone's eye in the first few seconds of viewing, chances are, they'll just lose interest and bugger off.
think about how YOU read websites and what you would rather see. Like scrolling threads in pimping and previews.
Also, when you do get to the work itself, the images are very small, it's hard to tell what is going on, and there aren't any wireframes, un-textured models,polycounts, or texture flats. Also, something pretty nit-picky, when you click on the environments section, you spelled the word "environments" wrong in your directory, like " http://www.3dandmore.com/enviorments .html" It's a small mistake, but every little bit helps. Take a second pass at the webpage and also if you haven't read the "Your Portfolio Repels Jobs" article in the Archives section here, you should check that out, helps a lot. Keep at it, and post some updates!
In fact it may just be the bright colours that remind me of clothes washing adverts behind the "portfolio of Jonathan M Edwards" text which make it look a little cheap in comparison to the rest of the site...which is pretty neat and stylish
<title>3D and more</title>
and of course bigger thumbnails.
I'd say it's a little wide, but I always say that. But it's a little too wide for my default browser size - so I had to widen it. Except all the content was on screen, it just had an ugly horizontal scroll bar. I just had to widen it to get the head to fit.
The header just stops. Yup. I widen it, and it has a hard line from black to white. Just set the background image of the side to be the black bar, so that it repeats horizontally.
The thumbnails are a better size, but some of the images they lead to are very small.
For my sake, check your spelling. Desert. Diagram.
Have a look at rewriting your CV - it's very hard to read in the current layout. The use of underlining and capitals seems the wrong way round, and you could vary your text sizes. The text seems to randomly jump around the page with no respect for margins or justification.
Make it readable.