Here are some concepts ive put together. A few of them were done a few months ago. The rest were done just recently. I'd like to know what you think c&c
thanks
Not much I can say ... other than the weird nipple style you got going on there ... sexy? No ... not sexy ... wait ... maybe ... ah, no ... not sexy. But interesting ...
really nice flowing lines man. Think I can see what tulk means about the feet, they both seem pointed the same direction
very nice still, especially the sea monster
I...er....sixth?...the motion on the style. Very clean too. I think they just need a bit more depth. Some rough shading should take care of that methinks.
Ouch to that small nice style skull chomping down on that guys upper wrist area. Bet if an enemy got a good shot in that head it'll slice his hand clean off. No wonder he has that mean look on him, I'd be pissed too if I had to wear that thing . Still liked the design when I saw it.
Dejavoodoo: lmao (you'll poke ur eye out) nipples ( )
I love that skull wrist guard thing and I really like your style. Though I will agree on the incorrect proportions and angle of the legs on the first concept. Everything else seems pretty solid to me.
Great stuff!
Thats the cleanest line work i have seen in a long time. Great concepts with room for some texturing to make em really pop. .. In 3d=awesome x 100.
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Thanks for the replies ..yea I was having a bit of trouble getting those legs to look right. I decided to leave them and hope they would magically fix themselves.. i guess not :] I don't usually color the drawings but I've been messing around with it more to hopefully help the contrast or a similar effect
Very nice indeed. I'll echo the sentiments about the line work. Reminds me of Bretts 2D stuff a little. My only niggle is in line with what MoP said; with line work that meticulously clean and precise, it exasperates any slight imperfections in the anatomy, particularly with the feet and lower legs of the character in the first sketch. They look positively broken. But really, this is great drawing overall. Very nice feel.
I love your work, I did a few basic art lessons, but im no expert at all. From what I can see, your linework is amazingly clean and smooth. Cool man, keep going, looks amazing.
Wow, that's awesome, I'd take scoobys lil contrast suggestion to heart cos it definately makes things even better. I think fully rendered concepts work better with a grey but linework definately lends itself more to sharp contrast.
I guess this will be my first post on Polycount. My name is Mya. I really like your style. The line work and organic style is hypnotizing. I need to brush up on my linework. My approach tends to stay away from linework altogether lately. Anyways. Amazing. You must have alot of experience under your belt. Looks like a model already.
those are gorgeous. the Octothingies left hand in a fist feels a little odd, but its no big deal really
bad ass line weight.
Think you could play a little more with silhouette weight, to give your poses more of a dynamic feel. Would help emphasize weight distribution and or forces on joints, etc.
Thanks for all the comments. I believe I grayed it down some so it wouldn't be so hard on the eyes due to the dark scheme of the forum, but it doesn't look bad with white as you pointed out. I will keep your critiques in mind for future works. thx
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Though your first guys legs look kinda funky. The way his feet are posed feels very awkward to me.
very nice still, especially the sea monster
That first guy's lower legs and feet are definitely wrong though.
Look forward to seeing more of your art
Dejavoodoo: lmao (you'll poke ur eye out) nipples (
Great stuff!
-caseyjones
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line quality to the max
http://www.jelmerboskma.com/gallery%20imagery/octo_geodone.jpg
do dinosaur have nipples?
A simple adjustment of contrast and you've got a whole lot more depth I think.
I'd love to see some colors.
The beast&rider one is my favorite btw!
Wow, that's awesome, I'd take scoobys lil contrast suggestion to heart cos it definately makes things even better. I think fully rendered concepts work better with a grey but linework definately lends itself more to sharp contrast.
really like the last two concepts. you've a knack for chunky nipples. I approve!
bad ass line weight.
Think you could play a little more with silhouette weight, to give your poses more of a dynamic feel. Would help emphasize weight distribution and or forces on joints, etc.