Portfolio works. WiP's. (Now, that is Girl NPC)

conte · May 2006

Has started to do works for portfolio.
I shall try to give all the best on 100 %
Here the first model: She is Girl NPC for MMORPG.
Concept:

Mesh:

Tulkamir · May 2006

Looking great.

What's the polycount and target polycount?

conte · May 2006

Tulkamir, thx for reply bro.
Model has 4134 triangles.

Now have finished texturing the handbag:

Rota626 · May 2006

This looks extremly promising, Keep it up!

Rota

polybrained · May 2006

looking good,with the quality of the bag texture I can tell she's gonna look great. one question though are you going for shorter hair than the concept? cause thats where the model looks like its going.

conte · May 2006

Update.
Polybrained, Rota626 - thanks guys

Tulkamir · May 2006

this is continuing to look great.

And yea, the model's hair looks a lot shorter. Not that that's a bad thing, I actually think I might like it more as is personally.

greenj2 · May 2006

The concept looks a bit masculine in the face to me. I think the jaw line is too wide for a woman and maybe the chin is a bit too big. Also I think adding some more obvious eyelashes and maybe painting some blond eyebrows the same way you've done the hair would help.

The model is looking good, only the neck seems a bit too long to me. And as a few people have mentioned the hair is a lot smaller than in the concept. If you're after the look you have in the concept I'd definitely lengthen and fan out the hair a bit more than it is currently.

Textures are looking very nice so far man, I'm looking forward to seeing more of them.

stoofoo · May 2006

Hey man, the textures are looking tops so far. Good work.

Some of the pressings on the purse look too bevel/embossy for me. Sort that out maybe?

Chi · May 2006

Textures are coming along nicely, I agree the concept face looks mascline but am sure the face model would look more femmine in the end.

hawken · May 2006

keep it up buddy, nice texture work here.

when you get to the head, please make her hair BIGGER!

conte · May 2006

Thanks for comments and criticism friends. About concept: She is the first girl whom I have drawn

That that it looks as the man, it yes. Concept I consider not so successful, I simply make a start from it, on a course I think out and I finish thinking about new things.
I have extended hair so it is better?

Emil Mujanovic · May 2006

Nice looking model dude! Very solid and clean mesh and the textures are looking great so far. Keep it up!

-caseyjones

conte · May 2006

she is wip wip=)

ebagg · May 2006

Damn, that avatar of yours puts me in a trance ;p

Everything looks great so far, my minor gripe is that she is a bit off from the concept, but maybe you prefer some of the creative decisions made while modeling. Also on a pretty detailed model like this, a bump map and spec map would make it even better. Keep at it!

Portfolio works. WiP's. (Now, that is Girl NPC)

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