DeathStranding2 Sniper Rifle-- Need your critique to Learn

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  kanga hero character

  Aug 27 2025

  Looks super clean and super tight. If you want to make great renders just look at artstation picks for reference. https://www.artstation.com/search?sort_by=relevance&query=weapons

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  AlexandrDm polycounter lvl 2

  Aug 28 2025

  Looks super cool! Maybe you could consider adding some roughness variation to the grip and plastic parts to boost the realistic look. 

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  Łukasz greentooth

  Aug 30 2025

  Looks solid, it might be nice to see also renders with uniform clay material - while you're looking at it you can analyse shading better. You can try to introduce some differences between pieces made of different materials for instance broader bevels on plastic than on metals etc. These are very small nuances but help to make forms and materials more readable. Perhaps some anti-slip patterned plastic could make some parts of grip more interseting.
  A problem with second render is lit part of the floor in the corner being the brightest spot, try to make it so composition is focused on model having areas of light and shade in mind. I'd suggest looking into three-point lighting setup for start.
  
  

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