Could I kindly request some feedback on a student project?

cturbo · Apr 21 2025

Hi there! Over the past six months, I've been studying Games Art and Design. Recently, I've been working on a student project where I'm creating a 16th-century bedroom. I would love to hear any constructive feedback you might have!

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Eric Chadwick · Apr 21 2025

Looking great so far, but the room is very empty and unfurnished. Are you planning to add more props? If not, I would suggest making a much smaller room, without so much empty space.

One other thing seems odd. The supports for the bed canopy are not centered on the legs, and the spiral seems too thin to support the weight.

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I would suggest thickening the spiral. For example:

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Eric Chadwick · Apr 21 2025

Also, heavy curtains are held open with a strap or pull. Yours seem to be missing this detail?

cturbo · Apr 21 2025

Hi Eric, I truly value your feedback! I would love to include more props, but I'm short on time and prefer not to rush the details at the last minute. However, I plan to add more after I submit it for my portfolio. I think it would be great to add tassels to the curtain pulls, but I'm a bit uncertain about how to make that happen for the games.

Could I kindly request some feedback on a student project?

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