Need feedback on revolver!

alexus_sanchez · Aug 2023

I have just posted a piece on my Artstation showcasing the Enfield No.2 Mark 1 Revolver and now ask for feedback/critique on anything! Could be the modeling, texturing, rendering, presentation etc. I'll post some renders here but far more is shown in my Artstation post below, including a Marmoset Viewer.

Link: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/zPnWy6

sacboi · Aug 2023

Over all looks good, although your grunge/dirt/dust? mask - imo can be slightly less uniform with areas of roughness, to break up large low frequency shapes.

alexus_sanchez · Aug 2023

sacboi said:

Over all looks good, although your grunge/dirt/dust? mask - imo can be slightly less uniform with areas of roughness, to break up large low frequency shapes.

What do you mean by "uniform with areas of roughness"? Is the grunge tiling too high/low?

sacboi · Aug 2023

alexus_sanchez said:

What do you mean by "uniform with areas of roughness"? Is the grunge tiling too high/low?

Sorry for the confusion, slightly to high is what I was trying to convey.

alexus_sanchez · Aug 2023

sacboi said:

alexus_sanchez said:
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What do you mean by "uniform with areas of roughness"? Is the grunge tiling too high/low?

Sorry for the confusion, slightly to high is what I was trying to convey.

Okok, thanks for the feedback!

Need feedback on revolver!

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