I have a feeling of strangeness in my eyes.

taki39 · Oct 2020

I created an eye.

I read it with the marmoset toolbag.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/zy/xermzxpopupn.png

It looks like plastic.

It's a failure.

Why did you fail?

Ideal eyes

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/84/ygthfl72o6qg.png

I am aiming to make this eye.

DavidCruz · Oct 2020

You didn't make sweet, sweet, love to the eyes.

taki39 · Oct 2020

Thank you for your reply.

I am not good at English.

[Love to the eyes.]

Did you have a problem with how I made it?

PolyHertz · Oct 2020

Even though you mention the 'outer glass part' it seems to be missing entirely (there's no reflection to indicate it exists). I don't see a caruncle either. Also, the pupil should not be reflective, as it's the part that most absorbs light. Another thing you're missing is a drop shadow from the eyelid, which can be produced via a shader or extra shell. Lastly it's worth mentioning that real eyelashes have uneven lengths and clump together (the ones on your model are far too even).

As for the example eyes; If you want to recreate them then aside from the above changes you'd also want to darken the outer iris, and use a simple black map with white circles as your reflection.

taki39 · Oct 2020

Thank you for your advice!

I learned.

[Even though you mention the'outer glass part' it seems to be missing entirely (there's no reflection to indicate it exists).]

Need to get rid of the dents and make a sphere?

For example

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/1b/p1i5qaxzn7h1.png

[If you want to recreate them then aside from the above changes you'd also want to darken the outer iris,]

Do I need to paint the outside of the iris black with paint software?

Will be painted in Photoshop or Substance Painter.

[simple black map with white circles as your reflection.]

What is a black map?

I do not know that.

I don't have enough knowledge about how to make eyes.

I plan to purchase a tutorial.

https://www.artstation.com/marketplace/p/M6Mz/realistic-eyes-for-games-marmoset-render

DavidCruz · Oct 2020

I would search more before purchasing tutorials.
Tutorial - robotic voice though, starts with marmoset.

https://youtu.be/f-MNFPrOiNc?t=1397
Hope it helps, i have no problem with the way you make eye, I hope you make best eye. My eyes will be watching for your best eyes, update.

Eric Chadwick · Oct 2020

We have some examples of eyes, down lower on the page
http://wiki.polycount.com/wiki/FaceTopology

Yerus · Oct 2020

Look what I found: https://polycount.com/discussion/199935/my-experience-about-how-to-make-realistic-eyes-in-marmoset-toolbag-3

taki39 · Oct 2020

David Cruz

Eric Chadwick

Yerus

Thank you for your reply!

What you taught me

studied.

I was able to improve the quality of my eyes.

Thank you!

taki39 · Oct 2020

afterwards,

I changed the eye settings.

There was a goal eye tutorial.

https://cgworld.jp/feature/201807-cgw234-vrkanojo.html

I need to add shadows and highlights.

I added shadows and highlights.

However, the shadows and highlights did not display correctly.

The shadow was painted black.

The highlight is to place the new object with a raised reflection.

How can I create shadows and highlights correctly?

Eric Chadwick · Oct 2020

Looking good.

The lighting will affect the eye reflections. So, create the lighting you want to see.

For a stylized eye, it may have it's own lighting texture (reflection map, or IBL - Image Based Lighting) which is applied only to the eye material, not to the rest of the character.

taki39 · Oct 2020

Thank you for your advice!

I learned that you can adjust the light of your eyes with a reflection map.

Thank you!

sprunghunt · Oct 2020

Your eye is looking better now but the one thing that stands out is that the iris doesn't have the dark band around the outside
edge that they have in real life.

I have a feeling of strangeness in my eyes.

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