[UE4] Abandoned Gas Station

victorullmann · Jun 2020

Hey Guys!

This is the scene that I'm work on while in the quarantine. I'm think that I'm very close to finish so I want any critiques that make me push forward the quality of the scene.

Thank you.

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teodar23 · Jun 2020

2 things: rust and grime is very random, doesnt take into account object shape. And that interior is very dark. Apart from that, looks great

Lewis_kennedy · Jun 2020

I think the interior needs a few more elements to it, it looks a bit too clean, maybe break one of the glass windows and have fragments scattered around, or add some rubbish or crack a tile

MatheusDalla · Jun 2020

Looking good!
i guess im missing some acess road, and some tire tracks would be cool.

Ashervisalis · Jun 2020

I feel the underside of this roof bit is far too shiny and clean compared to the rest of the scene. Also, an old rusted broken down vehicle would do this scene wonders. Oh, also maybe some garbage inside the building.

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victorullmann · Jun 2020

Thank you guys for all the feedback!

Lewis_kennedy · Jun 2020

just realized, all the dirt and grime on the windows is very obvious from the screenshots outside the gas station and the window is already broken, but you don't get any of that nice detail looking at the windows from the inside, is the material single sided maybe? getting all that detail to show through to the inside will improve the scene, especially if you can get the dirt and broken glass to effect the shadows on the ground.

victorullmann · Jul 2020

Hey Guys, Thank you all for the feedbacks and critiques. I finished the project and posted on Artstation.

More images, breakdowns and video on Artstation: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/rAAgzO

Thank you

tysiu · Jul 2020

Good job on this, you've taken all the critique and made it much, much stronger. Love it!

MatheusDalla · Jul 2020

really great!
i loved the glass shards on the inside!

[UE4] Abandoned Gas Station

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