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N0-VA96 rifle concept / feedback

KAE
KAE
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Hey guys!, here is my latest work. Rifle concept modeled in Fusion 360 and rendered in Corona 5 for 3ds max. Your feedback is much appreciated!.
This rifle uses cartridges, which contain next generation high frequency charged batteries. Each tiny battery builds the bullet head in form of two separate positive and negative terminals. These terminals will complete a closed-circuit as soon as they hit the target, which will cause an electrical explosion.
Shading time lapse can be found here:
https://youtu.be/qwnBGwIXdAg
More photos: 
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/aRnnXR







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  • Will_Maccabe
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    Will_Maccabe polycounter lvl 3
    Yes man, this is dope!  I think the handle could be comfier but I love the sci-fi feel of this thing. 
    re: the render... it looks nice, stylised. I think you can push the material definition and sort the lighting, it's washed out a bit imo.
    Overall, I think you have a good eye for designing guns, I also enjoyed your pistol. Keep on.  B)
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  • tynew
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    tynew polycounter lvl 9
    It's an interesting design with a good balance of detail. I don't understand how the hand is meant to sit to pull the trigger? Also the textures are completely butchering all your hard work here. It makes it difficult to read a lot of the geo. 
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