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HakanKamar_ · Nov 2019

Hello everyone, finished this piece last.

Would love some feedback on the face especially the eyes, skin surrounding them and overall hair.
But please if you see room for improvement let me know!

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DavidCruz · Nov 2019

Personal preference

https://i.pinimg.com/564x/f1/2b/97/f12b97db3b8dad32b728cffd9f558157.jpg

Would like to see more of this type of lighter damage on key spots at the trim of the leather coat.

If you don't mind purchasing a completed eye, online markets have some good products.

Otherwise, iris color looks to be black, the sclera red looks like its just the color red, no vein definition.

did i stumble upon the Head references? you used.

https://media.mnn.com/assets/images/2013/05/Wrinkles_m_0528.jpg.653x0_q80_crop-smart.jpg

https://images.medicaldaily.com/sites/medicaldaily.com/files/styles/headline/public/2016/05/29/old-man.jpg

The forehead wrinkles could be added and the eye brows don't reach where the crow wrinkles would be, see references linked.

This lower jaw reference might help make things more "realistic",:

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Ka9lPR

That is all i got for now, hope it helps.

This looks really nice however so i am just being picky.

kanga · Nov 2019

Looks good. The costume colors (especially the yellow) look a bit saturated. The specularity is a bit high and seems evenly applied on the costume and there doesnt appear to be specularity applied to the skin, or if thee is it is even at a low intensity.

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